Classwork 4 Narrative Paragraph ficction Complex Sentences and compound sentences

  Hey guy this week we will create a narrative fiction paragraph,  but using complex sentences, Compound Sentences,  Dependent, and Independent Clauses, as well as Connectors, to write a paragraph. 

Compound Sentences

 A compound sentence joins two or more sentences that have related ideas of equal importance. 

 The two sentences go together joined by a  cordinating conjuction.

  Each sentence must still have a subject a verb and a complement. 

 The two sentences are independent clauses.

Madeline was buried alive, but she was able to escape from the grave. 

Complex Sentences 

A complex sentence joins two or more sentences that have related ideas, but different levels of importance. 

The sentences go together joined by a punctuation mark or a connector. 

One of the sentences is an independent clause and the other or others are dependent clauses.

Because the environment house, Madeline and Roderick were sick  and depressed with strange illnesses.

Pre-writing Process

-      Target Audience - Who is my target audience?

 People who likesficctions  stories 

          Purpose - What is my purpose?

To tell them about this interisting story.

         Topic - What is my topic?

The fall of the house

   -            Brain Storming:

Mistery, murder, illness,lies, horror, loneliness,sadness, death and suffering.

Brainstorm: 

 

   Now we will continue with the outline, lets create the topic sentence and the full outline.

 Topic Sentence.

The Fall of the House of Usher is an exciting fictional story of mystery and horror.

 Outline:

 The Fall of the House of Usher

 I.                Introduction: The Fall of the House of Usher is an interesting story of mystery and terror. It is told by a narrator who is Roderick’s friend and who knows all the strange things that happen in there.

II. Two siblings living together in a mysterious house

A. The mysterious house with an evil atmosphere.

III. Siblings and the Issues health in the gloomy house

A. Roderick was sick because of the sick environment house

B. Madeline got a weird and incurable illness for the environment in the house.

IV. The death of Madeline because of her illness.

A.    Madeline died as consequence of a mysterious illness that doctors could not reverse.

B.    Madeline was buried alive by her brother.

V.    Things that ahappened after her dead

A.   Noises and weird lights started to appear into the house.

B.    Roderick’s issues health got more complicated because this.

VI. The death of Roderick and Fall of the house.

A. Roderick died when he saw her alive and bloodied inside the house.

B. The house cracked and collapsed after she appeared into the house.

C. The narrator was scared and ran away from her.

 VI. Conclusion: This is a story full of mystery and terror that tells the story of a woman who is buried alive by her brother, but she could escape from the tomb and take her revenge on her brother.

Now lets develope the paragraph according to the outline before and using conecctors , compounds sentences and complex sentences.

The Fall of the House of Usher

 The Fall of the House of Usher is an exciting fictional story of mystery and horror. The story is about two brothers who have lived together for many years in a large, isolated, gloomy, mysterious house. The story is told by Roderick’s friend.  Roderick was living in the same house with Madeline and Roderick. The house has an evil atmosphere also has decaying trees and murky puddles around it. Because the environment house, Madeline and Roderick were sick  and depressed with strange illnesses. It makes Roderick feel afraid and sick of his own house.On the other hand, Madeline suffered from a mysterious illness that doctors could not reverse, and she died as a result of it.Therefore, when she died, her brother Roderick decided to temporarily bury her in the graves under the house. Because of this, Roderick started hearing noises and seeing strange lights in the house , which every day intensified more.However here the most terrifying thing about this story was that Madeline was buried alive, but she was able to escape from the grave to look for her brother and take revenge on his.According to this story, he died of fright when he saw her alive into the house full of blood, when the narrator saw her alive, he scared a lot and, ran away from her .After that the house began to crack, and collapsed as if it had a spell or a curse. In conclusion The Fall of the House of Usher is a story full of mystery and terror that tells the story of a woman who is buried alive by her brother; however, she manages to escape from the tomb and return to the house to take her revenge on her brother collapsing the house after she appeared alive.